I'd forgotten that Luke met them at the airport. Neat.
I still want to know what Shahin felt in the walls. Wards? Security?
And I remain amused by the wheat jokes, and the fun conversation about names. I like the subtle hints of more plot.
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Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:50 am
moriden
Teacher
Joined: Mon Jan 19, 2009 2:37 am Posts: 361
Re: Chapter One - Shahin
my guess is a combination of wards and emotion fragments from thouse who have been here before. and of course premnitions for whats in store for her.
Mon Jan 19, 2009 2:39 am
effervescentjoy
Joined: Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:19 am Posts: 1
Re: Chapter One - Shahin
So, I finally caved and started reading this even though I know I don't have time... and you caught me. Like a fly in a spider web, two sentences in I was just drawn into the story and the characters, and now I'm addicted. I love the father/name thing. I have no idea what's going on, and introducing something so mysteeeerious right at the beginning of the story really has me hooked. MUST! KNOW! <3
~ Nadi
Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:22 am
Lyn Thorne-Alder
The Author
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 6:03 pm Posts: 3781
Re: Chapter One - Shahin
Hi, Nadi! I'm glad you're enjoying!
And there will be more about the name thing later... a couple few times, until it is all explained.
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